DOG-GONE

DOG-GONE (2013) Elliott James

This was an interesting story, and told me a little more about John Charming, the world he lives in, and his magical/mystical talents.

But I also found it rather confusing in parts, especially the beginning where the POV switches around. I had to go back and reread a couple times before I could figure out precisely who had been at the murder scene and when.

There were also a couple leaps of logic that made sense, but seemed to be awfully large leaps.

So, it was interesting–I quite liked the magical elements–but as a short story it had a couple problems that needed dealt.

But on the third hand, I read it for free, so there’s that.
Rating: 5.5/10

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